Wednesday, May 1, 2019

The Present description of the boy
The boy had hazel brown eyes which were glaring at the TV, ignoring everything. His hair was dark chocolate brown and he was wearing a lapis jumper. He had a medium nose with pink cheeks. He had dark jeans that were comfortable to wear.
                                                                                                                                         His behaviour was uncaring when didn’t care about the things around him. Selfish and annoyed, he ignored his mom and the present. He eyed the present in front of him suspiciously. His behaviour changed moody to guilty to happy when he started caring about the things around him. When  the boy open the present he was overjoyed. By Briar and Anjana                                                                                                                            

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  1. AnonymousMay 6, 2019 at 2:29 PM

    i really like your and you put in a lot of feelings and what you need to work on is only talk about the boy don't put in the mum or the present. OK!

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